The last weekend had everything that I want : free time for sharing with my family and reading my last favourite book , "À la recherche du temps perdu" , and even I could watch my favourite Tv serial drama "lost" and all this activities were possible because there was a long weekend for a holiday .
I was very happy (I really needed time for leisure ) but my weekend had a especial thing : I went out with my family to my aunt's farm in Cuchipuy, San Vicente of Tagua Tagua, this place is very beautiful, a bit simple but all the countryside has charm for me: blue sky, clean air, sound of animals ; also my aunt has just bought a filly and I didn't know to ride , and this was my great opportunity to learn it because my father would can teach me, He kept down the rein at the beginning then I lost my fear with the practice and finally I rode alone. I will always remember this day.
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Hi Catita..
There's my correction, hahahaha, I don't know if it's fine... I hope!
Hugs... Andi
The last weekend had everything that I want: free time for sharing with my family and reading my last favourite*(FAVORITE) book, "À la recherche du temps perdu", and even I could watch my favourite Tv serial drama "lost" and all this activities were possible because there was a long weekend for a holiday .
I was very happy (I really needed time for leisure) but my weekend had a*(AN) especial thing: I went out with my family to my aunt's farm in Cuchipuy, San Vicente of Tagua Tagua, this place is very beautiful, a bit simple but all the countryside has (A) charm for me: blue sky, clean air, sound of animals; also my aunt has just bought a filly and I didn't know to ride, and this was my great opportunity to learn it because my father *would can*(COULD)teach me. He kept down the rein at the beginning, then I lost my fear with the practice and finally I rode alone. I will always remember this day.
Mz Warrior.. I don't know if it's fine!!
Nice picture, Catalina Ema! I'm glad you had fun...Andrea, great job at correcting Caty's blog entry. The following is the way I would have corrected your blog entry:
The last weekend had everything that I want*(WANTED) : free time *(TO SHARE) with my family and *(TO READ)my last favourite *(FAVOURITE es arca'ico, se usa mas FAVORITE) book , "À la recherche du temps perdu" , and *(I COULD) even watch my favourite *(FAVORITE) Tv *(SHOW/DRAMA) "lost" and all *(THESE) activities were possible because *(IT) was a long *(HOLIDAY) weekend.
I was very happy (I really needed time for leisure ) but my weekend had a *(SPECIAL) thing : I went out with my family to my aunt's farm in Cuchipuy, San Vicente of Tagua Tagua, this place is very beautiful, a bit simple but all the countryside *(IS CHARMFUL): blue sky, clean air, sound*(S-MAKE PLURAL BECAUSE ANIMALS IS PLURAL) of animals ; also my aunt has just bought a filly *(FILLY? DO YOU MEAN PONY? HORSE?) and I didn't know *(HOW) to ride , and this was my great opportunity to learn it because my father would * teach me.* He kept * the rein *(DOWN) at the beginning then I lost my fear with *(recuerda no ocupas THE!) practice and finally I rode alone. I will always remember this day.
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