Monday, 28 April 2008

My presentation

This is my first experience with a blog I've listened about it but I thought it was very difficult because I usually dont speak about me but I have great expectations because I think it can helping me in this aspect.
I'm a girl from the country side, I left my home for coming to the capital city to became a Medical Technologist this is a health profession with work in laboratory , I perform medical test , I study in blood samples (and other fluids) biologic parameters like glycemia, proteinuria, hematocrito, and also I report findings in cells by a microscope for to assist the medical therapy and diagnose , I think that my future profession is very interesting because it joins the sciences with the medicine then I can work in investigation and this is a reason for my choice.
I said that I didn't live in a big city until enter to the university, and this is very important for me because I have many manners differents , I see the life in another angle : I do things very slow, and this is so difficult here, for example in the street all the people is hurry and in my native town there is not much cars then the traffic is more expedite and the people don't run usually, and they don't push for to go aboard a train, but with the time I accustom myself , and sometimes I run and push too.
I study a scientific profession but I love the literature , I always talk about that, I try interesting my friends in my favourites books , and this is a reason for be happy in this big city the big national library.

1 comment:

Ms. Guerrero said...

Catalina,
I left a comment about your settings information (favorite movies, interests, etc.). Great job on this homework assignment!!! I can totally understand your "My presentation" post. We are so much alike! Even though I don't come from a small town, Santiago was also too fast-paced for me: the people pushed me in the metro too! Ha ha Well, I'm very intrigued to learn about the specifics about your career choice, it's so cool! (Bakan!) Just in case you're a perfectionist like me, I will re-post your original entry "My presentation" with the corrections in CAPITAL LETTERS, separated by () and preceded by a *, so you can improve your small mistakes. Anyway, great job overall and I can't wait to read your next entry!
:-)
P.S. If you can't understand something I write, ask me in class and I'll explain it, ok?

"This is my first experience with a blog*(.) I've *(HEARD) about it but I thought it was very difficult because I usually (*DON'T) speak about me but I have great expectations because I think it can *(HELP) me in this aspect.
I'm a girl from the country side, I left my home *(TO COME)to the capital city to became a Medical Technologist*(:) this is a health profession *(THAT INVOLVES) work in laboratory , I perform medical *(TESTS) , I study * blood samples (and other fluids) biologic parameters like glycemia, proteinuria, hematocrito, and also I report findings in cells by a microscope *(IN ORDER) to assist *(IN) medical therapy and diagnose *(DISEASES). I think that my future profession is very interesting because it *(COMBINES) the sciences with *(NO SE OCUPA "the medicine" en ingles, solo en espan~ol "la medina") medicine then I can work in *(RESEARCH)and this is a reason for my *(CAREER)choice.
I said that I didn't live in a big city until *(I CAME) to the university, and this is very important for me because I have many *(DIFFERENT TRADITIONS) , I see *(AL IGUAL QUE "la medicina", "la vida" es en espan~ol pero en ingles no ocupas "the life") life in another angle : I do things very slow, and this is so difficult here*(.) For example *(,) in the street all the people *(ARE IN A) hurry and in my *(HOME) town there *(ARE) not *(MANY) cars *(SO) traffic is more expedite and the people don't *(USUALLY) run, and they don't push to *(BOARD A TRAIN). But with*(saque el "the") time *(,) I *(ACCUSTOMED) myself , and sometimes I run and push too.
I study a scientific profession but I love *(saque "the") literature , I always talk about that, *(AND) I try *(TO INTEREST)my friends in my *(FAVORITE)books , and this is a reason *(TO) be happy in this big city *(: podrias usar un simbolo como este en tu oracion ya que SE USA CUANDO VAS A EXPLICAR ALGO EN LA SEGUNDA PARTE DE LA ORACION O ESCRIBIR UNA LISTA..."I DON'T EAT CHOCOLATE: CHOCOLATE IS VERY BAD FOR YOUR BODY" "I LIKE ALL SORTS OF DESSERTS: CHEESE CAKE, FLAN, BROWNIES, CHOCOLATE CHIP COOKIES, AND ICE CREAM) the big national library."